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If I left, would you notice me?

If I cried, would you comfort me?

If you knew, would you be repulsed?

My heart is broken, shattered by a shadow.

It lies bleeding, but oh, but the pain is gorgeous.

I think I love it…

I am faulty, will you repair me?

My eyes are empty, as I look through to the open air.

I am nothing in the grand scheme of things…

But you, oh you, my love, are precious.

My Doctor, I need you, heal me please.

My Rose, I love you, will you stay forever?

This heart is broken, while the other beats.

Doctor, I love you…

Rose, I love you too….

We should have lived forever. It was cruel to not be at his side. I would be in
oblivion, but now I am trapped here in this world.

You are not here, but I would have burned up a sun to say goodbye.

Rose…Doctor…

I am running to you, but so far away. I love you so much. Do you even care?



A sort of Rose/10 shipping poem here. I didn't mean to turn it into one, but hey! let's leave it like this!
Hope you enjoy, as I won't be able to update soon for a while.
:iconiloveitplz: thanks for all the support guys!
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WHATTHESPRAYCHEESE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
At first I saw this poem thinking, nah it's not what I think it's about. Then. THEN. I READ it. And I go...." that was really amazing...". I think this captures the whole Rose/Doctor relationship in the most incredible words :D
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VeryLikeAWhale Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Artist
Thank you! I got emotional writing this.
Then when I finished I was like "Wow. This is actually okay."
:D I'm glad you like it!
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WHATTHESPRAYCHEESE Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome! It's awesome!
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VeryLikeAWhale Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student Artist
:)
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Mindimon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
at first i was like "wahh" then i kept reading Rose and Doctor and i was like "....OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" <3
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VeryLikeAWhale Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Artist
:P It wasn't actually going to be a Rose/Doctor when I started to write it. It just turned out that way! :D
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michaelaquino000 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist
WHY AM I KEPT GOING TO THIS PAGE?
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VeryLikeAWhale Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Artist
Because you like it? :P
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OerbaVanille Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, so sweet~!!

I love it so much!! :iconcutiesmileplz:
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VeryLikeAWhale Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks! It means a lot to me!
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